WALT- make a story
One day on halloween when John and John’s mum were outside milking the cow. Then John’s mum said sell the cow for some money because we need halloween decorations and candy. Then John saw a fat man then selled the cow to the fat man for some beans. Then John’s mum saw the beans and threw the bean outside. Then it grew and grew and grew. Then a bean tower appeared. Then John climbed up the bean tower then saw a giant and saw a duck laying golden eggs. Then John got the duck and John ran down the bean tower. Then John’s mum got an axe and chopped down the bean tower. Then I got rich in the end.
By Liam
Reflection
1 star- I like how my writing is good
1 wish- I wish that I can write more
Question do you like my writing
Hi Liam nice story i even like the end when they get rich if i had to rate this story i would rate it 10/9 all because you could add a little more detail and correct some of your grammer
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